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Mary Sue TEST - 15 questions by Aqua999 Mary Sue TEST - 15 questions by Aqua999
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EDIT: Popularity of this ran out of my control. I expected maybe 10 people to use the test, but boom, I posted it today and it's over 10000 downloads already. So before you start complaining just listen:
I was pissed off by a Mary Sue tossed into my fav canon, so I created this 2-minutes-to-fix-up silly Mary Sue Test and posted it here because I thought maybe SOMEONE will appreciate. But now that you all came her and told me either that it lacks something or that it's perfect, let me admit:
This test isn't perfect. It have a lot of flaws, grammar mistakes and lacks of questions, for example about personality, natural talents, and some questions may be even neccesary, because if you don't put a said feature along with several others they don't make a Mary Sue at all. I KNOW, 'KAY?
If you enjoy - and as far as I see most of you does enjoy - I'm glad, have fun, learn something if there's anything the test can teach you, just don't take it too seriously. It doesn't work for ALL kind of canons, stories and characters. And you know what? You can score 40 and more points here and still have an awesome character, if you're only cepable of keeping them realistic. And you can have a huge null of points and have as awesome character too. It's not about points, it's not about you OC's score, it about what you can do with it. I don't give a shit about math!

I have issues with fixing the main file of this deviation, but once we're on the subject, and you want to know if your OC is a Mary Sue/Gary Stu, ask yoursefl few more questions. Since the test is for just a little-Mary-Suists not for extra huge Mary Sue makers, answer the following:
:bulletred: Does other characters act different in your OC's presence? I don't mean just looking away, but totally twisting their personalities?
:bulletred: Does your character have 3 or more well-developed talents that she didn't spend loooong time training?
:bulletred: Is your character having only either friends or enemies, and no people who just don't care?
:bulletred: Did your character change lifes of many on her/his own?


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:iconkittylikestowrite:
KittyLikesToWrite Featured By Owner 1 day ago  New Deviant
1. Does your character have unnatural hair color? (dyed hair does not count) +2
No, she has red-ish brown hair.
2. Did your characters hair/eyes changed color over time on their own? +4
Yes because she turned into a demon so her right eye is red
3. Does your character have any super/unnatural powers? +2
If it's a conon where many character have powers, are your character's stronger then most of the others?
Yes, she has powers... she is a demon after all...
4. Does your character have two or more people romantically interested in them? +2
Nope! but Vemados has a huge crush on her..
5. Does you character have love interests in two or more people? +1
No. But she is a huge tsundere and doesn't know she likes Vemados too..XD
6. Your character's past is:
a) Tragic, traumatic +3
b) Mysterious, unknown +4
c) Regular +0 7.
I guess it was answer A because she grew up with no parents just her brother but she always says she had a great past because they had so much fun together..
Was your character technically dead and then it managed to come back to life? +5
Well.. Yeah.. She's a freakin' demon!
8. Does your OC become the main character of the canon once it's there? +6
Nope! XD
9. Can your character fight down the stronger enemies? +4
Yup!
10. Does your character have it's own nemesis or somebody powerful after them? +4
No.. i think?
11. Did your character kill anyone? +1
..... YUP! (She's just a teansy bit insane..)
12. Did your character saved somebody's life? +1
She saved her big brothers life and Vemados' life!! yay! not an evil demon.. kinda...
13. Does your character have unnatural features? (Like cat tail, animal ears, some claws or such) +1
point for every feature
She has cat ears and a cat tail! i like Japanese stuff so i just had to give them to her..
14. Is your character a mix of races? (Vampire, mutant, werewolf, fairy etc.) +1
point for every race
Part demon part human part CAT!
15. Does two (or more) organizations fight to get your OC jon them? +3
No..
TOTAL:
22!!!!
21-30 Your OC is acceptable, but maybe you could fix some things
Im not changing anytin'
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AtomicSpirit Featured By Owner 2 days ago  New Deviant Student General Artist
My fursona got +1 e____e im amazing.
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SilverDragonArtist Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Axis: 11.

Huh. Not bad.
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KrimsunV Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2015
1. Does your character have unnatural hair color? (dyed hair does not count) +2 
Yes, purple. 2.

2. Did your characters hair/eyes changed color over time on their own? +4

nope. 2

3. Does your character have any super/unnatural powers? +2 If it's a canon where many character have powers, are your character's stronger then most of the others'?

He's exactly as powerful as he should be. 2.

4. Does your character have two or more people romantically interested in them? +2 

nope, just one. and even then, it's just as much a desire to protect as romantic. 2.

5. Does your character have love interests in two or more people? +1 

i'm not sure if he even has one. 1.

6. Your character's past is: a) Tragic, traumatic +3 b) Mysterious, unknown +4 c) Regular +0

notably not tragic, it was intentionally good. 2

7. Was your character technically dead and then it managed to come back to life? +5

physically yes. 7.

8. Does your OC become the main character of the canon once it's there? +6

the canon doesn't have a designated main character, though you could argue he is. i'm one of the authors, so... 7

9. Can your character fight down the stronger enemies? +4

none have been fought yet. no, as there are no records. 7

10. Does your character have it's own nemesis or somebody powerful after them? +4

yes. 7

11. Did your character kill anyone? +1

Yes, as he doesn't know how dying works. this becomes a plot point. 8

12. Did your character saved somebody's life? +1

Indirectly, most likley. 8

13. Does your character have unnatural features? (Like cat tail, animal ears, some claws or such) +1 point for every feature

two ghostly tentacles coming from his back. enough said. also, gold eyes. 9

14. Is your character a mix of races? (Vampire, mutant, werewolf, fairy etc.) +1 point for every race

human and ghost. however, this is the only way his species can reproduce. 11

15. Does two (or more) organizations fight to get your OC jon them? +3

no, though both sides of the main confict have reason to take him. 
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ZeonBelial Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The main character of my novel got 12. Pretty good considering he's a king.
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CyberNomi Featured By Owner Edited Aug 13, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
1. Does your character have unnatural hair color? (dyed hair does not count) +2
Dark-blue with light blue highlights(Just because in her animal form she has dark blue fur with blue markings and light blue highlights on her mane)

2. Did your characters hair/eyes changed color over time on their own? +4
Nah.

3. Does your character have any super/unnatural powers? +2
If it's a conon where many character have powers, are your character's stronger then most of the others'?
Well, she's a demon. So she is really strong and fast... So I think yes.


4. Does your character have two or more people romantically interested in them? +2
Nah.

5. Does you character have love interests in two or more people? +1
Koga is everything for her.

6. Your character's past is:
a) Tragic, treumatic +3
b) Mysterious, unknown +4
c) Regular +0

I don't really know...

7. Was your character technically dead and then it managed to come back to life? +5
Just reincarnation.

8. Does your OC become the main character of the canon once it's there? +6
Nope.

9. Can your character fight down the stronger enemies? +4
No.

10. Does your character have it's own nemesis or somebody powerful after them? +4
Yes.

11. Did your character kill anyone? +1
Yes. (cuz she's a bit insane...)

12. Did your character saved somebody's life? +1
Yes.

13. Does your character have unnatural features? (Like cat tail, animal ears, some claws or such) +1 point for every feature
She's a wolf demon and in the "person mode" she has wolf ears and three wolf tails.
It is count? :/
(I don't know...)

14. Is your character a mix of races? (Vampire, mutant, werewolf, fairy etc.) +1 point for every race
No. She's just wolf demon who can transform into preson.

15. Does two (or more) organizations fight to get your OC jon them? +3
Technically yes. Her husband want her to join demons hunters organization... But it's just one so I don't know if it's cunting :/

17 without that 5 points form Q7. Because I don't know if reincarnation is counting... It's just Satanae, but there's more:
Yuki- 15
Naomi Nekomata- 11
Daniel- 15 < Just because it's fraking Homestuck.
Aiden- 9 < TBH I thought that he would has that 21-30 points. Oh well. And he is an incubus so he doesn't like killing...
Erin- 15 < Wow... Just wow...
Koga- 19


No matter which OC I do that test with, I just don't have any Mary Sues xd
I don't know if its a cool thing or not-cool thing... But I remember one of my very, very old OC for Code Lyoko. Thank god she's technically dead.


But, well, nobody cares anyway, so I can do whateva I want to...
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PlayboyVampire Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
1. Does your character have unnatural hair color? (dyed hair does not count) +2
She's a redhead, so no.
2. Did your characters hair/eyes changed color over time on their own? +4
no
3. Does your character have any super/unnatural powers? +2 If it's a canon where many character have powers, are your character's stronger then most of the others'?
She has angelic powers as well as traditional Vampiric powers. Are they powerful enough to stop say Death, no but can be proven to be formidable. Any stronger than Boogey? Unless light is involved, no chance in Hell.
4. Does your character have two or more people romantically interested in them? +2
no
5. Does your character have love interests in two or more people? +1
Just her wife.
6. Your character's past is: a) Tragic, traumatic +3 b) Mysterious, unknown +4 c) Regular +0
A.
7. Was your character technically dead and then it managed to come back to life? +5
no, but she became a Vampire after her banishment.
8. Does your OC become the main character of the canon once it's there? +6
Since she was the first I created, then yes.
9. Can your character fight down the stronger enemies? +4
no.
10. Does your character have it's own nemesis or somebody powerful after them? +4
It was Azarah, but she had a change of heart.
11. Did your character kill anyone? +1
Only to feed.
12. Did your character saved somebody's life? +1
not that I know of.
13. Does your character have unnatural features? (Like cat tail, animal ears, some claws or such) +1 point for every feature
outside of angelic/vampiric features, no.
14. Is your character a mix of races? (Vampire, mutant, werewolf, fairy etc.) +1 point for every race
Vampire and Angel
15. Does two (or more) organizations fight to get your OC jon them? +3
no.

11-20 Your OC is an interesting character with no overdose
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bluefox3465 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2015
i cant dawnload the file ;^;
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2009MEMETEAM Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2015  Student General Artist
I got 19 lmao
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Chocolate-Pastel Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2015  New Deviant Student Digital Artist
1. Does your character have unnatural hair colour? (dyed hair does not count) +2
No, just a brownish colour.
2. Did your characters hair/eyes changed colour over time on their own? +4
Never.
3. Does your character have any super/unnatural powers? +2 If it's a canon where many character have powers, are your character's stronger then most of the others'?
Limited telekinesis.
4. Does your character have two or more people romantically interested in them? +2
No.
5. Does you character have love interests in two or more people? +1
Only one, luckily.
6. Your character's past is:
a) Tragic, traumatic +3 b) Mysterious, unknown +4 c) Regular +0
C.
7. Was your character technically dead and then it managed to come back to life? +5
No.
8. Does your OC become the main character of the canon once it's there? +6
No. He's normally left out until needed, then he's a secondary character to whatever I've done with him, I guess.
9. Can your character fight down the stronger enemies? +4
No. He can't use anything to take them down, in fact.
10. Does your character have it's own nemesis or somebody powerful after them? +4
No.
11. Did your character kill anyone? +1
No.
12. Did your character save somebody's life? +1
No, he tried, though. The person ended up dying when he tried.
13. Does your character have unnatural features? (Like cat tail, animal ears, some claws or such) +1 point for every feature.
Nope.~
14. Is your character a mix of races? (Vampire, mutant, werewolf, fairy etc.) +1 point for every race
Eh, no. Just one race which he will always be.
A LION.

15. Does two (or more) organizations fight to get your OC jon them? +3
Nah.

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Two Points.
0-10 You'd rather travel to the moon and back again than create a Mary Sue on purpose.
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pokemonsonicgirl123 Featured By Owner Edited Jul 27, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
1. Does your character have unnatural hair color? (dyed hair does not count) +2
For the majority of the time, no.

2. Did your characters hair/eyes changed color over time on their own? +4
Nope.

3. Does your character have any super/unnatural powers? +2 If it's a conon where many character have powers, are your character's stronger then most of the others'?
Yes, and by slightly because she has Asperger's, so her sixth magic sense is higher than normal.

4. Does your character have two or more people romantically interested in them? +2
No. She has zero interest in purusing relationships.

5. Does you character have love interests in two or more people? +1
See the above.

6. Your character's past is:
a) Tragic, treumatic +3
b) Mysterious, unknown +4
c) Regular +0
C, unknown because I haven't thought up of a good backstory yet.

7. Was your character technically dead and then it managed to come back to life? +5
Reincarnated, yes. Came back to life, no.

8. Does your OC become the main character of the canon once it's there? +6
Originally, on my previous account, but nowadays she's an RP character.

9. Can your character fight down the stronger enemies? +4
It's up in the air, though she can only do it tag teams. Very rarely she does.

10. Does your character have it's own nemesis or somebody powerful after them? +4
Yeah, Dr. Eggman.

11. Did your character kill anyone? +1
Not that I know of.

12. Did your character saved somebody's life? +1
A lot of times.

13. Does your character have unnatural features? (Like cat tail, animal ears, some claws or such) +1 point for every feature
Only in her forms, previously.

14. Is your character a mix of races? (Vampire, mutant, werewolf, fairy etc.) +1 point for every race
No, though I do imagine that she would become a sorceress over time.

15. Does two (or more) organizations fight to get your OC jon them? +3
Nuh-uh.

Total points: 23.5. Hey, Ben 10 and Uta-Kata where my major influences back then!
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bIueness Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Rainbowdust:
Tf
3?!
I honestly expected more.
Does she being anthro count as her being a mix of wolf+human?


...Or is that a werewolf..
Llama Emoji-66 (Orly) [V3] Llama Emoji-66 (Orly) [V3] Llama Emoji-66 (Orly) [V3] 
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Majikkaru Featured By Owner Edited Jul 17, 2015
MARY SUE TEST 
Is you OC a Mary Sue?

The test works for most of canons.
If your answer to the following questions is "YES" add yourself the points.

1. Does your character have unnatural hair color? (dyed hair does not count) +2
If by 'unnatural' you mean blue, green or pink, then no. 


2. Did your characters hair/eyes changed color over time on their own? +4
No.


3. Does your character have any super/unnatural powers? +2

If it's a conon where many character have powers, are your character's stronger then most of the others'?
No, she's average


4. Does your character have two or more people romantically interested in them? +2
No, she's normal.


5. Does you character have love interests in two or more people? +1

No.


6. Your character's past is:
a) Tragic, traumatic +3 >No
b) Mysterious, unknown +4 >No
c) Regular +0  >No


7. Was your character technically dead and then it managed to come back to life? +5
No


8. Does your OC become the main character of the canon once it's there? +6
No, a universe is interesting because of it's characters. Making the OC the main would ruin things.



9. Can your character fight down the stronger enemies? +4
Depends on the situation and how strong they are


 
10. Does your character have it's own nemesis or somebody powerful after them? +4
No, everyone generally has the same nemesis.


11. Did your character kill anyone? +1
Yes, such edge.


12. Did your character saved somebody's life? +1
Yes,


13. Does your character have unnatural features? (Like cat tail, animal ears, some claws or such) +1 point for every feature
No


14. Is your character a mix of races? (Vampire, mutant, werewolf, fairy etc.) +1 point for every race
No

15. Does two (or more) organizations fight to get your OC jon them? +3
No

Isla: 2
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Eyeless-jack10 Featured By Owner Edited Jul 15, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Zack:7

Alex:7

John:9

Carla:4

Jack:15....*Frowns* Oi your supposed to be me Jack...but more awesome and a demon/human thing...dafuq you doing getting a 15! Dammit I have to count one more so now it's 16....fucking EYES!

Craz:10

James and Ryan (TWINS BITCHES THEY ARE THE SAME!Like seriously....they do almost everything together. Especially since James can not SPEAK!):7

Nate:....22.....*Shoves him in a closet and locks it* I never liked you...

Mason:3

Fawn:6

Luna:8

Well then!I think I did pretty well creating my babies! ....A few aren't here cause I never fully developed them but still....these are meh babies...Except for you Nate...you.....you stay in your closet of shame...Never liked you and most likely never will....*Sighs*But you are one of my Character's soo i have a little love for ya. I love how no one has anything below a three. All of your backstorys are messed up eh? 

ALSO Do you count each murder? Or each time they've saved someone?
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SchwarzerRitter Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2015
One single question is enough: Does the character bend the rules of the world he is living in, and it is not a comedy?
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hgfggg Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2015
nah two: does your character have flaws?
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:iconbiueness:
bIueness Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2015  Student Digital Artist
A flawless person has to have flaws to be flawless


Kinda ironic
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:iconhgfggg:
hgfggg Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2015
...what

in order to be flawless, you have to be compared to flaws. sure.
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:iconbiueness:
bIueness Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2015  Student Digital Artist
In order to be flawless,
You have to have flaws
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hgfggg Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2015
that makes no sense

you have to have other people with flaws to be compared with, sure.
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bIueness Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2015  Student Digital Artist
I did not say that
Just because it makes no sense doesn't mean it isn't true
Math makes no sense
The universe makes no sense
I make no sense
Humans make no sense
Earth makes no sense
Time makes no sense
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hgfggg Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2015
Math makes sense. Time makes sense. The Earth makes sense. Humans make sense. The universe makes sense, but we don't know EVERYTHING about all of these.
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SchwarzerRitter Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2015
A flawless character would break the rules of the universe.
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:iconhgfggg:
hgfggg Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2015
Which is exactly why they're a mary sue
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Marmal9000 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
what about gary stus (male mary sues)
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NoeruNeko Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Essentially the same thing as a Mary Sue, except male.
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Marmal9000 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
thats what i just said
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:iconmarmal9000:
Marmal9000 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
what the FUCK IS A MARY SUE
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NoeruNeko Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Mary Sues are just absolutely perfect without trying, everybody falls in love at first sight, jaw-dropping, tragic backstory characters.
In short, Bella Swan.
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Marmal9000 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
ohhhhhhhh
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0oCHARGERBOTo0 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Is this applicable to an alien OC? Many traits that might be considered MS material are not so when applied to an entire race of aliens who were shaped by the planet they are native to.
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SchwarzerRitter Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2015
All questions are relative. If the aliens have blue hair, then blue is not an unnatural hair colour.
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0oCHARGERBOTo0 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I guess that's what I'm trying to ask.
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DancingArti Featured By Owner Edited Jul 3, 2015
How to Download o-o? :iconcuriosityplz:
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TM2-Dinobot Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2015  Professional Writer
right click>open link in new tab
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DancingArti Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2015
On the picture? Cuz if on the picture, it just says

"Save Image as.."

"Copy Message URL"

"Copy Image"

"Open Image in a new tab"

"Search Google for this image" and

"Print Ctrl+ P"
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TM2-Dinobot Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2015  Professional Writer
No. Under the tab for favorites, there is a button for "download as." Right click on that one and open line in new tab. 
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DancingArti Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2015
Ohhh..

Ty :D
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xXrandom-shizXx Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2015  New Deviant
MARY SUE TEST (my Supernatural OC)
Is you OC a Mary Sue?

The test works for most of canons.
If your answer to the following questions is "YES" add yourself the points.

1. Does your character have unnatural hair color? (dyed hair does not count) +2
no she has brown hair

2. Did your characters hair/eyes changed color over time on their own? +4
no she had always had rust brown eyes

3. Does your character have any super/unnatural powers? +2
If it's a conon where many character have powers, are your character's stronger then most of the others'?
she does but she is an angle and many characters are angels in Supernatural

4. Does your character have two or more people romantically interested in them? +2
no
5. Does you character have love interests in two or more people? +1
yes but not at the same time

6. Your character's past is:
a) Tragic, traumatic +3 <<< she fell from heaven after being tricked into being possessed by a demon
b) Mysterious, unknown +4
c) Regular +0 

7. Was your character technically dead and then it managed to come back to life? +5
when she died she was dead

8. Does your OC become the main character of the canon once it's there? +6
no she barely talks to the canon characters

9. Can your character fight down the stronger enemies? +4
no, if they are stronger she would die
 
10. Does your character have it's own nemesis or somebody powerful after them? +4
nope

11. Did your character kill anyone? +1
yes, it is part of her job

12. Did your character saved somebody's life? +1
yes, because She was Sarah's guardian angel (aka part of her job)

13. Does your character have unnatural features? (Like cat tail, animal ears, some claws or such) +1 point for every feature
nope, she has wings but she is an angle so that isn't really unnatural for them

14. Is your character a mix of races? (Vampire, mutant, werewolf, fairy etc.) +1 point for every race
no, full angle

15. Does two (or more) organizations fight to get your OC jon them? +3
no, she just hunts demons with her friends Sarah and Wynn

I may think of more questions later.
okay

TOTAL: 6
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shadowangel33 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2015  Student Artist
i got 20
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Mewtres Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
MY HTF OC: LUCKY
1. Does your character have an unnatural hair color? (dyed hair does not count) +2
No. But she has white fur with gray markings. But, that's only because she is a cat.
2. Did your character's hair/eyes change color overtime on their own? +4
Again, no.
3. Does your character have any super/unnatural powers? +2 If it's a canon where many character have powers, are your character's stronger then most of the others'?
Again, no.
4. Does your character have two or more people romantically interested in them? +2
Disco Bear is the only character who has a crush on her, but he has a crush on just about every female in the series. (Which is, like, four, by the way.)
5. Does your character have love interests in two or more people? +1
No, she only has a crush on one character, and that is Mime. But she's so shy that she doesn't want to admit it to him.
6. Your character's past is:
a) Tragic, traumatic +3
b) Mysterious, unknown +4
c) Regular +0

Regular.
7. Was your character technically dead and then it managed to come back to life? +5
Well, yes. But then again, she is a Happy Tree Friends OC, and when a character in that series dies, they are revived in an episode. Does this count?
8. Does your OC become the main character of the canon once it's there? +6
No. In fact, HTF doesn't HAVE a MAIN character.
9. Can your character fight down the stronger enemies? +4
Nope. Even when she tries to use her claws, she only ends up either just scratching them or missing.
10. Does your character have its own nemesis or somebody powerful after them? +4
No, she doesn't. Unless if you count The Cursed Idol, Splendont, or Lifty and Shifty, but all four are villains and Lifty and Shifty don't even HAVE superpowers.
11. Did your character kill anyone? +1
Yes, but that is just a thing that normally happens in the series. Does this also count?
12. Did your character save somebody's life? +1
Actually, maybe one time. She might save a character's life, but they would probably both get killed anyway.
13. Does your character have unnatural features? (Like cat tail, animal ears, some claws or such) +1 point for every feature
She has all three of the listed features, including most of the other features of a cat, but like I said, she IS a cat, so I wouldn't call any of those features "unnatural."
14. Is your character a mix of races? (Vampire, mutant, werewolf, fairy etc.) +1 point for every race
No
15. Does two (or more) organizations fight to get your OC join them? +3
She has no superpowers, so nope.

So I guess I either got one point or seven.
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OverProtective Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
My OC Miah got an 8. Huh.
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GenerallyIronicSoaps Featured By Owner May 25, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Huh, Blue is a 7-8 :/
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Stargadsky Featured By Owner Edited May 19, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
the part of the extra body parts (animal ears , tail etc) does it count if things like these are pretty common in canon?

if so : 8
not sure if boring or unsuspicious (relatively)
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Divine-Decree Featured By Owner May 19, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I got 10 for one and 11 for another but this "test" doesn't seem to let people have interesting oc's. Just because an oc has powers doesn't make them a Mary sue, unless they have no weaknesses and a perfect personality to match. Another thing, what's so bad about a character coming back to life or being healed if it can actually be explained. Like for example my oc "died", gave up her body to insert her conciseness into an AI, but she came back to life as the AI once essentially wiping the other one from existence. I chose not to even count that because there is no way that counts as being a Mary sue. Also, why do abnormalities add to that? I understand if they're over the top but like one thing that makes them stand out should not count. Like I have an oc with a synthetic arm, without it she wouldn't be the character she is. She would also be dead. Another one has silver hair, it isn't natural nor was he born that way: he is part of a group of super soldiers that have implants that give them the ability to manipulate raw energy, the side effect of such implant is not only does the raw energy turn their eyes a pale blue but also changes their hair colour to silver. I could go on but what I'm saying is you make it like an oc has to be an ordinary person like you or me to avoid being a mary sue but those characters are boring. No one wants to read about an ordinary character only doing ordinary things.
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ceepcalmandeat Featured By Owner May 17, 2015  Student Writer
Having a CreepyPasta OC Test:"Has your character killed anyone" Me: Well fuck....... +1+1+1+1+1+1+1
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shadhardblogger Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2015  Student Writer
This survey is recommended for those who need it.
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ares12 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2015  Student Writer
My OC Azdahag Commission Azdahag vs Deathstroke : 29. Not bad, but she still needs some work, even if she is badass.

My new OC Lykaina Commission: Lykaina : 17...
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Black-Rose45 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2015  Student Writer
It won't work
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Stettafire Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
My newest charcter from my novel came out as 15, not bad I think:)
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